Thursday, November 19, 2009

Discussion on Wemmick

As Pip has gone to work with Wemmick and has gone to his house, he discovers that this man-- who is very serious, cruel, and efficient at work, and loving, giddy with joy, and care-free at home-- has two very different sides, and even witnesses the transformation from Wemmick's work side to and his kinder side at home. When Pip goes over to Wemmick's house after work, Wemmick turns from a serious man, to a loving man as they got closer to home; once they arrived at Wemmick's house, which he calls a castle, Wemmick is a full-on loving man. He gives Pip a tour of his house, showing pride and happiness at every corner of his property; Wemmick loves is flag pole-- and the fact that he puts the flag on it at a certain time each day--and his draw-bridge that covers the small hole in front of his house, and the gothic windows. On their way to work, every step that the two took, Wemmick's face hardened, and even seemed to have cracks in it. This transformation, that Pip just witnessed, proved that this man has two total different sides; it almost seems as if Wemmick is afraid to be affectionate towards his friends in front of Jaggers, as if he is intimidated by him.


4 comments:

  1. Ever hear the expression "A man's home is his castle"? How would Dickens be using this phrase to get a point across?

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  2. I like your use of syntactic devices; they fit very nicely in your writing. Maybe next time you could split this one paragraph into two, to separate the ideas.

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  3. Nice job. I really like how you described Pip's experience with a lot of detail. However, it seemed to me that the part where Wemmick goes back to work was a little abrupt. It took me a few time reading that sentence to get it. But otherwise, your piece is great!

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  4. You showed the difference between Wemmick at work and at home very well. I liked how you showed how proud he was of his home and how comfortable he was in it. This piece of writing sounded a little summative so be careful of that. Add a little more voice and opinion in to even that out. Great job! :D

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